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jasonmitchell:

Write a Character Analysis Hamadi http://k12host.seewritehear.com/E9497FE8-1DFA-4942-AECF-331FE87F23D6/SummitEnglish9-10/index.html?page=301&read=1 Write two-paragraph analysis of the character

jasonmitchell:

@Elsa213

Elsa213:

Did you already start or need help beginning? o:

jasonmitchell:

k how to start it off from Hamadi In ''Hamadi'', In this story is about a teenage girl named Susan who is very questioning about things around her.

jasonmitchell:

i just need help with what else got with that

jasonmitchell:

if you read the story

Elsa213:

What is the conflict she is facing?

jasonmitchell:

she was facing like questioning almost every day aspects of life cause she was very curious and inquisitive such as refugees, old people and every human that are part of any traits today.

Elsa213:

Okay, add that to the paragraph. c:

jasonmitchell:

you think that's what i should add ?

jasonmitchell:

could you see if it's makes sense about her in the story ?

jasonmitchell:

@Elsa213

Elsa213:

Susan was a very curious girl who would find herself helpful sometimes. She was questionable and imaginative. As she pictured the golden Sphinx looking somewhat like her grandmother when she waited for the bread to cook in the oven.

Elsa213:

I don't see the conflict in the passage. o:

jasonmitchell:

right cause there ain't none

jasonmitchell:

or another story

Elsa213:

Rip c'x

jasonmitchell:

do you know everything that rises must converge, the bet, or the day i got lost ?

Elsa213:

Naww e.e

jasonmitchell:

would you like to see one of them i'm suggesting the first one ?

jasonmitchell:

@Elsa213

Elsa213:

Alright. :3

jasonmitchell:

what do you think about it ?

Elsa213:

Seems like Julian is embarrassed by his mother's appearance. e.e

jasonmitchell:

so it seems like his mother is the antagonist

Elsa213:

Yeee o:

jasonmitchell:

In ''Everything That Rises Must Converge'', In this story is about

jasonmitchell:

In ''Everything That Rises Must Converge'', In this story is about ? what should i start it off with

jasonmitchell:

cause his mother is the antagonist

Elsa213:

The story is about a mother who is overweight and needs to lose weight. Her son Julian seems to be embarrassed by his mother's appearance.

jasonmitchell:

that's the first part

jasonmitchell:

now the second

Elsa213:

That's how you start it off. e.e

jasonmitchell:

right but i write something else about her from the passage

Elsa213:

The mother enjoys spending time with her son.

jasonmitchell:

The narrator describes her as childlike, almost feeble-minded.

jasonmitchell:

it's something in the story about her that her personality, what did she do and character traits

Elsa213:

`Everything that gave her pleasure was small and depressed him. She lifted the hat one more time and set it down slowly on top of her head. Two wings of gray hair protruded on either side of her florid face, but her eyes, sky-blue, were as innocent and untouched by experience as they must have been when she was ten.`

jasonmitchell:

ok what do you think The story is about a mother who is overweight and needs to lose weight. Her son Julian seems to be embarrassed by his mother's appearance. Everything that gave her pleasure was small and depressed him. She lifted the hat one more time and set it down slowly on top of her head. Two wings of gray hair protruded on either side of her florid face, but her eyes, sky-blue, were as innocent and untouched by experience as they must have been when she was ten.

jasonmitchell:

i have to right this in my own words

jasonmitchell:

Julian’s Mother values manners and appearances and loves cute children of all races so much that she has a habit of gifting them coins.

Elsa213:

Nononono The last response I posted, I took from the passage to give you an idea.

jasonmitchell:

oh i see

Elsa213:

Welcome to QuestionCove. c'x

jasonmitchell:

ok so far i'm writing it out

Elsa213:

Okieeeeeeeeeeeeee

jasonmitchell:

In ''Everything That Rises Must Converge'', in this story is is about a mother who is overweight and needs to lose weight. Julian's mother seems to be a caring and a nice person who has a fond with children of all such as she has a habit of gifting them coins. Also, she would values manners and appearance to show that her weight didn't worn her down for doing something for children

jasonmitchell:

what do you think what else i should add with it, i need your help

Elsa213:

`In the story "Everything That Rises Must Converge'', a mother who is overweight and needs to lose weight. Julian's mother seems to be a caring and a nice person who has a fond with children of all such as she has a habit of gifting them coins. Also, she would values manners and appears to show that her weight didn't wear her down for doing something for children.` I corrected the grammar and punctuation.

Elsa213:

It seems fine. o:

jasonmitchell:

thank you Elsa you're really smart with English

Elsa213:

I'm not sure if you're being sarcastic e.e Butt okiee c'x You're smart, boiii

jasonmitchell:

no i'm serious you are

jasonmitchell:

btw you're guy or girl

Elsa213:

Aweh, thank you. ;u; <3 Everyone questions the same stuffz. c'x I never expose my gender. ;o

jasonmitchell:

ok but i can tell you're a female

jasonmitchell:

and can you blame em ?

Elsa213:

Are you sure? c;

jasonmitchell:

YES cause you said Aweh, thank you. i never no guy say that after i thank them unless they're sissies but only a girl would say that

Elsa213:

I thought all users say that. e.e

jasonmitchell:

mm not many but i think you are a female and have a heart by your name in your profile pic

Elsa213:

A user made it for me. :p

jasonmitchell:

ok so now you're saying you're not ?

Elsa213:

Never said that. cx

jasonmitchell:

MM OK THEN

Elsa213:

I'm ungendered, boi

jasonmitchell:

ight

jasonmitchell:

well elsa could you help me with a new questions

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