Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. She pulled out her phone to text her friend. Someone on the bus asked her about her phone. The bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She had forgotten her purse!

Answer 1

Eomma @Elsa213

Answer 2

Edumacation required

Answer 3

@Elsa213 !!!!

Answer 4

Edumacation is everything e.e

Answer 5

how can you not do this by yourself tho ._.

Answer 6

LETS ALL GET EDUMACATED

Answer 7

new I already did the last week nueee T-T

Answer 8

Okayy cx
What is ` temporal transitions`?

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Cause i like having Eomma check meh work

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writers use transitions known as temporal clues. These are transitions that bring your reader through the story from the beginning to the end.

Answer 11

Here are some examples of temporal transitions:

with reference to
together with
in the same way
in comparison
likewise
coupled with
moreover
correspondingly
with regard to

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Temporal Transitions that Show Sequence or a Shift in Time or Setting

for the time being
simultaneously
first of all
earlier
meanwhile
in time
by the way
in the distance over there

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Temporal Transitions that Build Suspense

unexpectedly
in a flash
before I knew it
suddenly shockingly
out of the blue
at once
all of a sudden little by little

Answer 14

One time, Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. Soon, she pulled out her phone to text her friend. Unexpectedly, someone on the bus asked her about her phone. Finally, the bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. In conclusion, she had forgotten her purse!

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Wait did u just give meh da answer e.e

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Nu. e.e
You didn't add additional details or information. <.<

Answer 17

Ok thats what i thought cause i was like Why is she giving me da answer she never does that

Answer 18

I always do. c'x

Answer 19

x'D Yeah

Answer 20

In a flash, Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. Soon after that, she pulled out her phone to text her friend. Unexpectedly, someone on the bus asked her about her phone. She replied to there question and Pointed to the store she bought it at. Thats the store i bought my phone from its over there she says. Before she knew it, the bus arrived at the mall, and Leah got out. She suddenly remembered she left her purse on the bus. All of a sudden The man was behind Leah with her purse and gave it to her. In conclusion, she had forgotten her purse but because she was nice to the man she got it back.

Answer 21

@Elsa213 Eomma

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the red words are the transitions

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In a flash, Leah grabbed her purse and got on the bus. Soon after that, she pulled out her phone to text her friend. Unexpectedly, someone on the bus asked her about her phone. She replied to their question and pointed to the store she bought it at. "That's the store I bought my phone from; it's over there," she says. Before she knew it, the bus arrived at the mall and Leah got out. She suddenly remembered she left her purse on the bus. All of a sudden, the man was behind Leah with her purse and gave it to her. In conclusion, she had forgotten her purse but because she was nice to the man she got it back.

Answer 24

I corrected the grammar and punctuations.

Answer 25

Tank yew <3
Can yew helo with one more e.e

Answer 26

Ofc. ^.^

Answer 27

YAY!