Question

I have a speech that I wrote and I'd like someone to go over it and tell me what my wrongs pls ( and here is my rubric for the speech)

Answer 1

Post your speech. I’ll have time to thoroughly look at it this afternoon.

Answer 2

Ok

Answer 3

I really dont know if you could even call this a speech though lol.

Answer 4

@Shadow will you still be able to check over it now?

Answer 5

I haven't read it yet but I can do so now. Just from reading over the criteria, I think rhetorical devices will be the most difficult part.

Answer 6

Yes

Answer 7

Did you make sure to get at least three, with one being parallel structure.

Answer 8

" It’s often appealing to many countries still it is necessary for their economies, societies, politics, and cultures."

still -> because

Answer 9

"So, globalization has brought both negative and positive impact on the world." Redundant, 3rd sentence, compare to the 1st sentence.

" Globalization has had a positive and negative effect on many developing countries."

Answer 10

By the way, if you have Google Docs, this could go a lot faster, as I can comment on the document.

Answer 11

kk

Answer 12

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Nkph8pK2ffInTv0iFS1sGORImYzYicTeTvFA-oNpzwY/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 13

My email is theshadowlegendx@gmail.com

So you can share permissions

Answer 14

oh

Answer 15

Going to grab lunch with a friend. I can continue with this after my class.