Question

Eomma e.e

Answer 1

This story is about King Pluto and how he became the king of the underworld. It all started one after noon; Pluto’s Father, Titan Cronus had two other son’s: Zeus and Poseidon. They Joined the Olympian gods to figure out which part of the world they could rule. In the end Zeus got the Sky, Poseidon got the Sea, and Pluto got the Underworld. “Why do I get the underworld” said Pluto, “because you lost” replied Titan Cronus. “You now have to live in the underworld for eternity Judging Death,” said Titan Cronus. Pluto was then sent to the underworld. “This place is so dark and gloomy,” he said with a frown on his face. “I don’t get why Zeus got the sky and Poseidon got the Sea. I’m older than them, I should be the one in the sky,” said Pluto out of frustration.
A few years pasted and Pluto is starting to get used to the gloomy world he rules. King Pluto was eating his lunch and sighed. “What is wrong your highness? You usually eat everything on your plate,” asked Quicksilver. “It is so lonely in here the only person I talk to are you and it’s getting old no offence,” said King Pluto. “What would you like in order to make you feel less lonely? I can go find a Puppy soul that you could play with,” said Quicksilver. All of a sudden the ground starts shaking. “Huh? What’s going on why is it shaking,” asked Pluto. “There is someone pulling a plant of yours out of the ground your Highness,” said Quicksilver. “Someone stealing a flower? Well I must meet them and ask why,” Pluto replied. Quicksilver and King Pluto got into the carriage and started going towards the shaking. As they got closer and closer to the shaking a hole starts to grow in the roof of the underworld showing the sun and blue sky. “Ugh it is so bright how do people live like this,” Said king Pluto. “Sir it was a little girl pulling at the flowers,” whispered Quicksilver. “A little girl? She would be a perfect addition to my castle; she would spark joy in every room she would enter,” said Pluto. As King Pluto gets out of the carriage he Asks the little girl over. Once the girl came over to him he asked her a question. “Little girl would you like to live with me?” “No I want to live with my mother,” the little girl replied. “But I wish for you to live with me and Bring light into my castle,” he explained. “I’m sorry but I do not wish to live with you,” said the girl. King Pluto was not amused and took the girl anyway. “Don’t worry I will not harm you I just wish for you to bring joy into my gloomy castle.”

Answer 2

@Elsa213

Answer 3

` All of a sudden the ground starts shaking.`

You're missing a comma.

`All of a sudden,`*

Answer 4

`Offence` should be `offense`.

Answer 5

`As they got closer and closer to the shaking a hole starts to grow in the roof of the underworld showing the sun and blue sky.`

As they got closer and closer to the shaking, a hole starts to grow in the roof of the underworld showing the sun and blue sky.

Answer 6

`As King Pluto gets out of the carriage he Asks the little girl over.`
Asks would be lowercase.

Answer 7

The rest seems alright, Anime.

Answer 8

THX SO MUCH EOMMA <3 You just helped me and saved me like 2 hours of work

Answer 9

Hehe, ofc. <3

Answer 10

Offense and offence have no difference, just location where it’s used

Answer 11

Fyte meh, boi

Answer 12

Nu, I gave you a medal XD

Answer 13

e.e
Pssh

Answer 14

Tank yew doe <.< >.>

Answer 15

Ofcs masta