Hailey15:
Can someone help check my essay before I submit it? please?
kendra4640:
I can post it
Hailey15:
how?
Hailey15:
Do I send it to you?
kendra4640:
I meant you post
Hailey15:
Can I post it as an attachment?
Elsa213:
Yes. :3
Hailey15:
Can you open it?
kendra4640:
No it says (Bad Request Your browser sent a request that this server could not understand. Additionally, a 400 Bad Request error was encountered while trying to use an ErrorDocument to handle the request.)
Elsa213:
You can try copy and paste. o:
Hailey15:
Oh ok
kendra4640:
Wow well first mistake I see is god when it should be God
Hailey15:
oh right
kendra4640:
enthen Christian
Hailey15:
ooh
kendra4640:
SO fist of all what grade are you in ?
Hailey15:
10
kendra4640:
Okay so I went on google and went on a paper rater and you would have got a 80%B so I will copy and past the correct one two you and you can go on from there okay.
Elsa213:
`In his early childhood, Blake claimed that he could see spirits. At age four, he saw God and at age nine, he said he saw a tree filled with angels. As he grew older, he studied engraving and came to love gothic art. He incorporated what he enjoyed into his own unique work. Blake was also known as a religious person; he was a Christian and as a result, he conveyed his beliefs and religion in his own poetry and literary work many times. ` Your punctuation was incorrect.
Hailey15:
Yea I did that on Grammarly already and this is what I pasted from it
Hailey15:
Oh I see, let me correct it
kendra4640:
oh okay well good luck from there okay.
Hailey15:
Thanks
kendra4640:
And if you may tell me what grade you get at your school
Hailey15:
Alrighty :)
kendra4640:
Thank you.
Shadow:
I can throw it on a Google Doc and take a look at it if you want.
Hailey15:
That would be great! please
Hailey15:
Thank you
Hailey15:
do you need my email?
Ultrilliam:
Wait
Hailey15:
ok
Ultrilliam:
Could you please rename the file without the `%'s`?
Ultrilliam:
the % signs is what is breaking it =P
Hailey15:
ooh yes let me try again
Shadow:
It can be viewed by anyone. Give me your email if you'd want to edit it directly.
Ultrilliam:
Lemme add this to the list of bugs to fix, not sure how this one slipped past my radar
Shadow:
You can edit now.
Hailey15:
THANK YOU! :) yall the best!
kendra4640:
Oh your welcome your so sweet.
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