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Animegiftedgirl:

Guys I need to write a fable that includes the following: • included a narrator and character(s) • created a conclusion that resolves a conflict or problem • use complete sentences

Razor:

Hmm

Razor:

How long will it have to be?

Animegiftedgirl:

2 or 3 paragraphs

Razor:

okay Do you have any ideas yet?

Animegiftedgirl:

Not really that's why I posted cuz I'm stumped

Razor:

First think of what your favorite animal or inspired hero is. When you figure that out list his/her traits.

Razor:

Don't use already taken people or heros, just a different person with same traits

Animegiftedgirl:

hm...Let's see so my favorite animal?

Razor:

animal, person, hero, character, anything living

Animegiftedgirl:

Welp, my fav animal is a cheetah

Razor:

Ooo. Would you like to make you animal person like or keep it as an animal?

Razor:

your*

Animegiftedgirl:

Keep it an animal is neat

Razor:

Okay. Have any morals your audience will need to learn?

Elsa213:

Erm.... e.e I have a story I wrote a while back because I misinterpreted the instructions. ;-; I can give it to you if you'd like. o:

Razor:

^ Cheating >..>

Elsa213:

Breh I just want et to be useful. ;-; <\3

Razor:

Ish okay your useful to me. I kinda need to participate anyway n this site

Razor:

I love writing ^^

Animegiftedgirl:

@Elsa213 I think @Razor Has it k? If I need ya ill call

Razor:

hue hue hue yay

Elsa213:

Okayy. e.e

Animegiftedgirl:

XD So what else?

Razor:

XD Welp what about a second character that the first can interact with?

Animegiftedgirl:

hm so let's see I also like lynx's

Razor:

Oooo. Well do you wanna give names to these animals or leave them? And what would you like them to learn or end up learning

Animegiftedgirl:

Welp,....The names will be....Cassy....and Ashley but I'm don't know about what I want them to learn yet

Razor:

Here's a list Greed Selfishness Sharing procrastination Searching for impossible things have no value

Animegiftedgirl:

hm How about sharing

Razor:

Okay. Who is going to share with who? (You might wanna jot these down btw if you close your post)

Animegiftedgirl:

Well, I guess the Cheetah will share with the lynx (And I already am trust me I'm not as stupid as I look)

Razor:

XD You dont look stupid) Now what audience is this directed towards? What age group? and what type of fan base?

Animegiftedgirl:

(Bet) Hm age group...11 to 13 s? and what cha mean fan base?

Razor:

like a marvel movie is directed towards familys, and fan boys XD

Animegiftedgirl:

XD welp..I am still confused but I guess fan base of kids?

Razor:

pretty much. Okay. Story outline, plot, and conclusion, We got the simple stuff out of the way

Razor:

And setting never forget setting XD

Animegiftedgirl:

XD The setting is a meadow with a lake in the middle...

Razor:

oooooooooooooo I like it!.. Okay. Type 3 sentence in your reply with when the Lynx and Cheetah meet. some sentences can be Dialog as well but you would have to verify who is speaking

Razor:

And stay in 3rd person.

Razor:

XD It's okay you can delete it

Animegiftedgirl:

One day a Cheetah was strolling along the edge of the lake. This Cheetahs name was Cassy, She always loved strolling along the lake. Cassy heard a noise in the bushes she looked to find herself eye level to a lynx. Not just a lynx but Ashley the lynx. Ashley was always a bully and a hog. Cassy hated her.

Razor:

Good good!

Razor:

Now on the last two sentences, I would say combine those and where the period is replace with a comma

Animegiftedgirl:

Okay

Razor:

So that's one paragraph. Now we need mild conflict. Maybe add a little dialog, a stern tone. Maybe have Ashley holding something that Cassy wants? Or wants to split?

Animegiftedgirl:

Hm, I was kind thinking that Ashley wanted the whole meadow to herself but Casey wanted the meadow too

Razor:

That's good! You're doing great Anime! ^^

Animegiftedgirl:

Thanks!

Razor:

Now add 5 sentences to your next paragraph and have them greet each other and the rest take on from there. If you want your paragraphs longer the limit is over 5 sentences but under 13 sentences.

Animegiftedgirl:

Okay so there will be some dialog in this one

Razor:

Okay ^^

Animegiftedgirl:

"What are you doing here?" Ashley said rudely, "What do you mean, I'm always here" said Casey confused "Well, not anymore your not I want this meadow" Said Ashley and snarled. Casey was mad "Why can't we share it? Casey says and snarls as well. "Well, cuz I don't want to now leave" Ashley says. The Anger boils up in Casey.

Razor:

That's good! You're doing great! Look out for sentences that need punctuation! And since your last paragraph should be the story or conclusion if you want the morale to get through you might have to add a little more to your send paragraph.

Animegiftedgirl:

OKay

Animegiftedgirl:

Oops it just deleted everything I wrote...But I had that Ashley gets an arrow in her leg and Casey helps her to safety and then in the last one I'll have that Ashley regrets kicking Casey out of the Meadow and is thankful cuz Casey helped her instead of fleeing for her own life and learns to share

Razor:

okay.

Razor:

Lastly! Finally >..> Conclusion?

Animegiftedgirl:

Last one: Ashley and Casey became friends and whenever Ashley went to be a rude hog with everything Casey reminded her to share and they all lived happily ever after!

Razor:

Good! XD phew su much work... Honestly the conclusion should have 5 sentences too. Just saying everything other then that is good. Write it down and turn it in ig ^^ Have a good day and remember to close the post when you are finished I BELIEVE IN YOU!!

Animegiftedgirl:

:D U should be a teacher!

Razor:

.......awwwww.....thank yew ^^

Animegiftedgirl:

:)

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