Question

Hey Guys!! I don't really need help. However I want to know what you think about this parallel plot I wrote for the Boy in the Striped Pajamas. Here is the story:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19T3EYbch_Hb9vQlRv2-Ph_5W5fA8KG4kpCJlhq4j4tk/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

I can give it a read.

Answer 2

5->five

You could clean up some of the beginning but overall I enjoyed the read. Good job.

Answer 3

I like this. but the beginning iz a little confuzing?

Answer 4

I always loved that story. That's a cool thing ya did there. ^^

Answer 5

Thanks guys. The beginning was kind of in the "middle" of the original story so it was kind of difficult to write.