Question

Anger

Answer 1

There is this feeling that wants to explode in a burst of sparks
This-this monster deep inside me burning with passion trying to escape
When I decide to set it free is when the rampage starts
This feeling I wear on my back like a cape
Sometimes when I set this monster free it leaves marks
This monster kills me every time it gets free, it fills me with hate
It also controls me and forces me to say rude remarks
Maybe this feeling is just up to fate
Or maybe this feeling is because of the people who bark
This monster of the worst kind of evil, this feeling of heat
All these emotions escaping from this monster
But maybe…
That monster….
Is me.

Answer 2

I like it, everyone has monsters though. You got have to work on controlling it. Also I would like you to know if you can do poems you can do songs :P

Answer 3

gurl, this is a poem

Answer 4

its not supposed to describe me or anyone, just the emotion i feel when im angry

Answer 5

I know

Answer 6

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Answer 7

@563blackghost

Answer 8

@YoursTruly

Answer 9

i like it... its a good poem

Answer 10

You didn't ping me ):

Answer 11

@WhipStreak23

Answer 12

Wdym

Answer 13

YASSS

Answer 14

@Shadow

Answer 15

As a conservative I tend to not like free verse but I can appreciate poems of reflection and openness. Not saying you should change how you write. You do you, and what’s best for getting your thoughts and ideas down.

Answer 16

Also the effort shows. I like that.

Answer 17

i tried doing rhyme scheme but my word choices made it difficult xD

Answer 18

like not much rhymes with escape

Answer 19

Yeah it isn’t easy and takes time. That’s why it is helpful to have a vast diction. There are plenty of websites that have words that rhyme but I try not to find myself there often, haha.

Answer 20

Pretty creative way of writing, sir. ^^

Answer 21

@Yinshy