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Any suggestions on my persuasive essay? Anything I can change, rearrange, or add? Thanks!

AP:

Paragraph 4 - instead of "unbelief" go with "disbelief". --- Remove "Anyways" --- "rejected every single..." should be "rejecting every single..." (for parallel structure) --- "continued to bring us down" to "continuing to bring us down" (also for parallel structure) --- "recognized" to "recognizes" Paragraph 7 - "hundreds of questions asked" ~ [I'd suggest adding the word "with" before 'hundreds'] Great work, overall ((:

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