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psirockin2:

Can someone assist me with brainstorming for an essay? It's due at 10:30 my time. It's a finish the story type and it's kinda like a groundhog day scenario. Just want ideas. Leaning more towards writing about the girl never getting out of groundhog day

punisher432:

like what do you mean? do you mean the girl is on a never ending loop on ground hogs day?

psirockin2:

The girl was mean to someone and then met some lady who cast a "hex" on her to repeat a day of her choosing and now I have to pick up from the girl repeating the day she chose

punisher432:

thats a very good start. now you have to think why did she choose ground hogs day? what did she want to repeat on that day. Was it a date that went bad, or something trajic that happened

psirockin2:

No... it's like the movie groundhog Day. She picked a day and it's repeating itself.

punisher432:

well what day is she repeating? is there a reason she wanted to repeat that day?

psirockin2:

Because the girl doesn't care about school and wanted to relive the same day so she could tell her class partner to grow a pair.

psirockin2:

Better yet, I'll just post the passage so you can understand it better. I'm not very good at describing things

punisher432:

ok gotcha then i can help yah :)

psirockin2:

This is the story. Straight from the working packet

punisher432:

wow that is really good. You can go from there that she went home and went to bed hoping this was all her imagination but she wakes up to the same day. Then she goes to school and tells the people she wants off

psirockin2:

And then I can have it where she does that same thing 3 or 4 times in a row and learns that she had to be kind?

punisher432:

ooooooh yes. Make it so she keeps doing it but figures she has to be kind and forgiving to break the loop. that all along she never wanted to tell them off she just was annoyed

psirockin2:

Oh, I get it. Thank you :)

punisher432:

no problem glad to help. The story definantly grabs the readers attention. end it with her figuring out the had to be kind :)

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