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BenLindquist:

lyric poem 12-20 lines. Use any meter and any rhyme scheme. Use imagery that can be visualized by the reader. Use at lease one metaphor or simile. Use at least two musical effects. List the techniques you used after they occur. 7. Write a brief paragraph (50-100) words for the meaning of the poem.

BenLindquist:

@Pixel

Pixel:

Uh

Pixel:

what ya want it to be about my boi

BenLindquist:

@Pixel hmmm. Tbh anything that won't get me expelled

Pixel:

Don;t do drugs They spill on rugs never buy mugs always give hugs kill all bugs kiss all pugs

BenLindquist:

tf useless

Pixel:

Reeeeeeeeeeeee

BenLindquist:

that's not even the minimum lvl

Pixel:

bro that took me 2 minutes to write

Pixel:

</3

Pixel:

Lol i know

Pixel:

well classic rhyme scheme is ABAB

Pixel:

Lke mice and bread thats nice heavy like lead

Pixel:

A B A B^

Pixel:

imagery is like The Green sparkling blades of grass shimmering because of tiny droplets of morning mist

BenLindquist:

So the ABAB scheme it basically needs one thing to match with the other?

Pixel:

Well A is one word B is the other

Pixel:

take Rice as A and Fun as B

Pixel:

the rhyme scheme is ABAB so it should go rice fun nice run

Pixel:

i have my own poem for inspiration, but you cn't copy it

BenLindquist:

i won't.

Pixel:

There is this feeling that wants to explode in a burst of sparks This-this monster deep inside me burning with passion trying to escape When I decide to set it free is when the rampage starts This feeling I wear on my back like a cape Sometimes when I set this monster free it leaves marks This monster kills me every time it gets free, it fills me with hate It also controls me and forces me to say rude remarks Maybe this feeling is just up to fate Or maybe this feeling is because of the people who bark This monster of the worst kind of evil, this feeling of heat All these emotions escaping from this monster But maybe… That monster…. Is me.

Pixel:

the beginning is perfect ABAB example

BenLindquist:

ok

Pixel:

and it comes from my emotions, so it's easy to write

Pixel:

similie is Ben played as hard as a rock

Pixel:

wait i messed tht up

Pixel:

its like as

Pixel:

wait wut hold on xD

Pixel:

yeah it's like as

Pixel:

as brave as a lion, crazy like a fox

BenLindquist:

yeah I get the simile and the musical effects.

BenLindquist:

what should I write on for this?

Pixel:

well, what would you wanna write about

Pixel:

like a setting/feeling/place

Pixel:

or an object

BenLindquist:

well it has to be a lyric poem. I was thinking to do one like the road not taken.

Pixel:

good choice

Pixel:

"Frost" is a good poet

BenLindquist:

when it says the techniques used after what should I put?

Pixel:

well let's say you used a couplet, then you would put a couplet

Pixel:

Ex: rapping at my door, shouting nevermore ^the raven ~ Edgar Allen Poe

BenLindquist:

ok ill start to write it

Pixel:

I'll check it later when i can, i have a driving lesson today

BenLindquist:

ok

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