Read the sentence.

Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and he also wrote essays.

Which revision most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

Walt Whitman, an American, not only wrote poetry but also essays and newspaper stories.

American poet Walt Whitman wrote for newspapers and also essays.

American Walt Whitman wrote poetry as well as writing for newspapers and essays.

Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and essayist.

Question

Read the sentence.

Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and he also wrote essays.

Which revision most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

Walt Whitman, an American, not only wrote poetry but also essays and newspaper stories.

American poet Walt Whitman wrote for newspapers and also essays.

American Walt Whitman wrote poetry as well as writing for newspapers and essays.

Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and essayist.

Valirium · Answer

@Elsa213 I need some help for this e.e
I'm thinking it's B or C, but C kinda sounds weird.

Elsa213 · Answer

I think it's B. e.e