Question

just wrote this, thoughts?

Answer 1

I walked the halls of titans
To see what greatness wrought
Upon the stones of their make
Blood melded with asphalt
Salt lined the cracks,
Tears embedded with a souls last
Heart to give, in service to
A being made from all of you

Their statues were adorned,
With every facet of mankind to give
Love featured on their faces
With a blade falling beside,
“Give or we will give”
And their plights were not thin,
Yet they might as well have been

Answer 2

Short but sweet and meaningful. :D

Answer 3

Does it have a title or do you just write these without one?

Answer 4

The latter.

Answer 5

Ah, nice.

Answer 6

Shadow can I steal this for an english assignment

Answer 7

I gotta write poems brother plz

Answer 8

lol no

Answer 9

Just rhyme stuff (:

Answer 10

Come on lemme get it

Answer 11

Rhyming is hard

Answer 12

Like this:
Your name is Bear I really care This is just an example, so don't give me those stares.

Answer 13

*ahem* Nevermind, that's more for rapping. Poems are kinda different lmao

Answer 14

Imma steal that rn

Answer 15

Copyright claims

Answer 16

¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'm fine with it, i wrote that in under 10 seconds lmao xD

Answer 17

What you find in the city,
Where smoke fills the room
Toxic air, borne from them
Societal constructs and hollow fools
A path made for divine tools
Take of it not, turn thy face
To where adventure takes you
The green apertures beckon thy faith
Meet the forest at its border
Stare into the merits to forage
Adrenaline you seek, rapture for the meek
Find in me, the creature you flee
Bear the thought, to be the bear of me

Answer 18

@Bearclaws72 English assignment

Answer 19

YES

Answer 20

I love the usage of figurative language :)

Answer 21

dang first comment in two years

Answer 22

legend

Answer 23

I agree with @maths89898 said. You are a legend at writing poems.