Question

Any sonet ideas to write about or how to start it off?

Answer 1

Like I wrote a one but it sounds bad.....


My precious chocolate you inspire me to live

How I love the way you look, taste, and smell

Invading my mind day and throughout the night

Your absence makes me feel unwell



Let me compare you to my previous lover

caramel it was, you are sweeter, darker, and tastier

I often hide you under my bed cover

From my enemies who are thirstier



Your square shaped body turns me on

When I notice you I’m filled with delight

In the morning I stare at you until dawn

Then I realize am I alright?



I know you’re bad for me, but I can’t resist

When I remember our first kiss.

Answer 2

It sounds good to me

Answer 3

Do you think there are more ways for me to make this poem sound a little more “professional and romantic” maybe? Or do you know anyone who can ?

Answer 4

Nah, I think it's fine the way it is

Answer 5

OMG I LOVE THIS!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!