Can someone please proofread my poetry analysis? It was for a summer assignment, so it's a measure of what I already know, meaning it doesn't have to be perfect, but I appreciate any help!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12Cv1iYMkZru2LXcbrQg41SaBt-vVABtYr72xPf5YZqQ/edit?usp=sharing

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Gdeinward · Answer

It is perfect for a summer assignment. Tho you might want to expand the conclusion a little but.

Gdeinward · Answer

bit

cyborgmeat · Answer

yeah i'm not the best at conclusions lmao, so i just made a thesis for my conclusion

Ferredoxin4 · Answer

Well it's great but looking from the AP Lit aspect if you want to impress your teacher maybe try talking about the stylistic devices that I mentioned earlier as well as the emotional appeal & tone.

cyborgmeat · Answer

well, there isn't really an argument here so pathos isn't an important factor i don't think

Ferredoxin4 · Answer

pathos doesn't necessarily mean that there's an argument in the story. You could talk about pathos by mentioning the tone of the passage, and more importantly how he uses informal diction to craft the tone of the poem.

Also, when you said repetition, it would more specifically be an anaphora. That would impress your teacher if you would like to add it

but otherwise I think it's good enough being a summer assignment.

cyborgmeat · Answer

i did mention that it was anaphora i thought?