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Kayleemitchell15:

Spouting plums of water through their trunks the children giggle at the elephants Which of the following best correct the dangling modifier? A: Spouting plumes of water through their trunks, Maria and Marco giggled at the elephants. B: The elephants spouting plumes of water through their trunks, the children giggled at them C: The children spouted plumes of water through their trunks; the elephants giggled at them D: The children giggled at the elephants spouting plumes of water through their trunks.

Vocaloid:

so the problem w/ the original is that the modifier "spouting plums of water..." is meant to modify elephants, but is placed closer to "children" which seems to suggest that it's the children spouting water. try to find the sentence that is both 1. grammatically correct and 2. makes it clear that it's the elephants who are spouting water.

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