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cyborgmeat:

thank you to everyone that read and reviewed my story!!

Hero:

My suggestion is to develop your write short story blogs using Word Press and promoting your work in social media in a way that drives traffic to your blog. You have a talent. Now you just need to think about how you can use it to write great stories that focus on character development. If you listened to the Shadow series, then you can see how developing a series around a mysterious yet intriguing character can be capturing for audiences attracted to that specific genre. Good luck.

cyborgmeat:

this was just for an assignment in creative writing so i'm not sure if i want to make a series out of it or promote it haha, but thank you!! if i did, i'd definitely write a prequel that explains more of his origin story (how he came to learn about his powers and such), and finish writing what happens in this story. but for now, it's just a snapshot short-story

cyborgmeat:

and comments are enabled in case anyone wants to suggest anything

PinkGlitterz:

that's great!

cyborgmeat:

thank you!

Evo:

nice job

cyborgmeat:

gracias

Gdeinward:

I really enjoyed that. I would love to hear more!

Gdeinward:

I think theres not much you really need to change.

Gdeinward:

you just need to expand on it.

Evo:

make it a novel and sell it for 60 bucks

cyborgmeat:

yeah it's only a short story for now

Gdeinward:

or team up with an artist and make a comic out of it. Marvel and DC'll be jealous as hell.

Gdeinward:

though it could never beat the mcu.

cyborgmeat:

bold of you to assume i'm not already an artist ;)

Evo:

i think @demolisher1224 knows a guy who knows a guy that can make animations out of his stories ask him and he'll tell

cyborgmeat:

not good enough to make a well-selling comic series but i can draw

Gdeinward:

I didnt say you were or wernt. Comics generally have multiple artists.

cyborgmeat:

ye i'm just joking

Evo:

and he does it for free

Gdeinward:

I figured as much. I think you have some really good writing skills.

Gdeinward:

THe animations would have to be good. If they werent it would take away from the story.

Evo:

hes really good just ask @demolisher1224

cyborgmeat:

yeah i can draw but not professionally so if i were to consider that, i probably would team up with a professional

Evo:

yeah he's a professional from china and does animations for stories that ppl make and does it for a cheap price

Gdeinward:

ahhh. I thought he would do it for free...... :P

Evo:

i think he does it for free as well im not sure but @demolisher1224 knows

Evo:

it would be really cool to see ur short story on tv

Gdeinward:

Evo, where did you get your profile picture? #iloveLSASoUE

Evo:

its from gravity falls :p

Evo:

the tv show remember

Gdeinward:

hence the animation. I think ive watched one episode of that. maby.

cyborgmeat:

it's really good! shame that it had to end so soon though ):

Evo:

ikr ):

Evo:

cyborg is that ur dog xD

cyborgmeat:

nah unfortunately i dont have any pets. just thought it was cute lmao

Evo:

oh xD

Gdeinward:

not your dog does look cute.

cyborgmeat:

lmao yeah s/he does

Gdeinward:

Are you guys fans of predator and or alien?

cyborgmeat:

i played predatory for like 10 minutes around 4 years ago and ive never seen alien lmao. but the character design is really rad

cyborgmeat:

predator*

Evo:

ive heard of it

cyborgmeat:

i absolutely love monster design

cyborgmeat:

i've drawn quite a few monsters actually hehe https://www.deviantart.com/herobrinea1234/art/My-Heart-s-A-Mess-734086125 here's one. he's from a gotye music video but i absolutely adore his design. i drew this a whiiile ago though so it's eh. feel free to check out the rest of my page for more monster bois

Evo:

wow thats really good

Gdeinward:

can you send the link to my gmail? I cant view it on here. gdeinward@gmail

cyborgmeat:

sure thing, one sec

cyborgmeat:

disregard the name of my spam email btw

Gdeinward:

ive never played the game, but I would like too. Check out my profie pic. its got a an awsome battle between the 2.

cyborgmeat:

sent

Gdeinward:

thanks

Gdeinward:

thats pretty cool!

Gdeinward:

you gotta watch the movies. most of them are good. My favs are predator, the predator, AVP, and Aliens.

cyborgmeat:

alien or aliens? or is aliens the sequel to alien?

Gdeinward:

aliens is the sequel. and I think its far better than the first. You almost want to watch part 2 first so you dont get disappointed. You gotta keep in mind alien was made in the 70;s and its got good effects. I just think it is kinda slow.

Gdeinward:

AVP is alien vs predator.

Gdeinward:

I enjoy greek myth! I would love to see some more. Perhaps medusa, or hydra?

cyborgmeat:

i drew a hydra! he's on my page along with cerberus

Gdeinward:

oh yeah. the one with the head lying on the ground?

cyborgmeat:

yep

Gdeinward:

you ought to draw a kampe. I think it would be great!

cyborgmeat:

lmao thats a lot of animals in one

Gdeinward:

true. But it would be neat with just a few faces.

cyborgmeat:

there are lots of different artist interpretations on the internet so i have no idea what to draw

Gdeinward:

I think the challenge would be well worth it.

cyborgmeat:

fair point. seems like a fun myth to draw if i can get it

cyborgmeat:

i love dragons so a dragoness/human/50-animal-head-belt creature would be fun

Gdeinward:

I wouldnt want to mess with her.

Gdeinward:

if you ever decide to do it, i would be happy to give ideas.

Gdeinward:

here is a good drawing:

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cyborgmeat:

i'll definitely keep it in mind!

demolisher1224:

Im done with story's for a while

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