Question

Possible causes include a combination of biological, psychological, and social sources of distress. Increasingly, research suggests these factors may cause changes in brain function, including altered activity of certain neural circuits in the brain.
The persistent feeling of sadness or loss of interest that characterizes major depression can lead to a range of behavioral and physical symptoms. These may include changes in sleep, appetite, energy level, concentration, daily behavior, or self-esteem. Depression can also be associated with thoughts of suicide.
The mainstay of treatment is usually medication, talk therapy, or a combination of the two. Increasingly, research suggests these treatments may normalize brain changes associated with depression. is this a good paragraph about depression?

Answer 1

Is this from AP Pysch?
So you can also list these aspects:
-What was the humanistic, psychoanalytic, and behavioral reasoning for MDD?
-Talk about the genetic predisposition for MDD
-Talk about the 2 kinds of stress
-More treatments for MDD, from Behavioral treatments to Electroconvulsive therapy. Also magnetic transcranial stimulations
-Talk about how to diagnose MDD, the criteria from DSM 5
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Answer 2

you used increasingly twice

Answer 3

try to use different, more appropriate transitions.

Answer 4

I assume it must have been a mistake considering you have the exact sentence at the begiining and end

Answer 5

it was i was rushing

Answer 6

Talk about neurotransmitters involved.
Talk more about the structures of the brain involved in depression (limbic system).

Otherwise that works

Answer 7

okay ty

Answer 8

A big one - the diastress thesis model and the implications of the nature v nurture debate in stress related mental health conditions (goes along with genetic predisposition)