Question

Elshaaa <3

Answer 1

the first thing i have to do is make a paragraph answering this "What do you think would be the toughest part about securing a crime scene or collecting evidence? Why?" i was thinking

The toughest part about collecting evidence is that evidence is very small and can be not seen by the naked eye. Fingerprints you can barely seen if its on a cup or on a door knob. In order to find this evidence you would have to use the finger print powder this helps show the fingerprints in depth and see every line to indicate who was here at that time.

Answer 2

remember not all evidence is small.

Answer 3

you need to include that the toughest part would be securing evidence not visiblt ot the naked eye. The way it is worded can be misleading

Answer 4

evidence can be small but can be very big at the same time but the small evidence is tough to find compared to the bigger evidence

Answer 5

yes but you write it like all evidence is small. You and I know that it is not, but the teacher I think would knock off points

Answer 6

also fingerprints don't necessarily indicate the time, just the person.

Answer 7

A better example would be DNA. Or you could include it along with your fingerprint example

Answer 8

The toughest part about collecting evidence is that evidence can be very small and sometimes can be not seen by the naked eye. Fingerprints for example can barely be seen mostly if its on a cup or on a door knob. In order to find this evidence you would have to use the fingerprint powder which helps show the fingerprints in depth and see every line to indicate who the person is. Another difficult part about collecting evidence is how you store it. If it's a knife our job is to place it into a paper bag but if the evidence is sensitive enough it could be ruined with one touch this is extremely difficult.

Answer 9

e.e bam how this

Answer 10

thats a lot better, but make sure to examine the grammar used as well.

Answer 11

I would remove this is extremely difficult as it messes up the flow. But other than that it is far better than the original