Question

Eliminate wordiness in the following sentences. Make the sentences as short as they can be, but do not eliminate any of the details.

A conclusion was reached by biologists that pesticides were the cause of the problem.

(Biologists concluded that pesticides caused the problem.) My answer

A conclusion concluded by biologists said that pesticides were the problem.

Sentence is fine the way it is, so no change needed.

Answer 1

your answer I think is good

Answer 2

Thanks

Answer 3

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