Question

When Mary Lennox was sent to Misselthwaite manor to live 1with her uncle everybody said she was the most disagreeable-looking child ever seen. It was true, too.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) with her uncle, everybody
C) with her uncle. Everybody
D) with her uncle; everybody

Answer 1

What do you think?

Answer 2

Second choice seems correct.

Answer 3

I agree, B does sound better.

Answer 4

The sentence was not over so it can't be the third choice.
The fourth choice is similar to the third choice.

Answer 5

And the first one is definitely wrong...

Answer 6

^

Answer 7

It's for sure B cc

Answer 8

cx

Answer 9

She had a little thin face, and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) had a little thin face, body
C) had a little thin face, a little thin body
D) had a little thin face and a little thin body

Answer 10

I think it's the fourth choice. o:

What do you think, @CoolRekterizer ? :o

Answer 11

I believe D is the correct answer.