Question

The young English, governess who came to teach her to read and write disliked her so much that she gave up her place in three months, and, when other governesses came to try to fill it, she always went away in a shorter time than the first one.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) The young English governess, who came to teach her
C) The young English governess who came to teach her
D) The young, English, governess who came to teach her

Answer 1

@Elsa213

Answer 2

What do you think?

Answer 3

C

Answer 4

I agree.

Answer 5

The young English, governess who came to teach her to read and write disliked her so much that she gave up her place in three months, and, when other governesses came to try to fill it, she always went away in a shorter time than the first one.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) try to fill it she
C) try to fill it, they
D) try to fill it they

Answer 6

What do you think?

Answer 7

A ?

Answer 8

I think it's either the first or third choice. e.e

@AngeI

Answer 9

hmm probably the first

Answer 10

Probably.

Answer 11

If Mary had not chosen to really want to know how to read books she would never have learned her letters at all.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.
A) NO CHANGE
B) So if Mary had not chosen
C) Yet if Mary had not chosen
D) But if Mary had not chosen

Answer 12

A

Answer 13

I agree.

Answer 14

The one you tagged me on i think is C

Answer 15

One frightfully hot morning, when she was about nine years old she awakened feeling very cross, and she became crosser still when she saw that the servant who stood by her bedside was not her Ayah.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) when she was about nine years old, she
C) when she was about, nine years old, she
D) when she was about nine years old; she

Answer 16

I think it is the second choice.

`when she was about nine years old, she `

Answer 17

She looked frightened, but she only stammered that the Ayah could not come, and, when Mary through herself into a passion and beat and kicked her, she looked only more frighteningly scared and repeated that it was not possible for the Ayah to come to Missie Sahib.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.
A) NO CHANGE
B) frightened
C) frightened and scared
D) frantically terrified

Answer 18

Why do you keep doing it in the same post?