She looked frightened, but she only stammered that the Ayah could not come, and, when Mary through herself into a passion and beat and kicked her, she looked only more frighteningly scared and repeated that it was not possible for the Ayah to come to Missie Sahib. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) frightened C) frightened and scared D) frantically terrified
I have the book so I'll cheat. e.e It's the second choice.
At this point, the author is thinking of adding the sentence: There was something mysterious in the air that morning. Should this sentence be added? A) Yes, because it creates greater suspense. B) No, because it is unnecessary and redundant. C) Yes, because it provides a link to describing Mary’s day. D) No, because the reader is already aware of the day’s mysteriousness.
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