Question

At this point, the author is thinking of adding the sentence:

There was something mysterious in the air that morning.

Should this sentence be added?

A) Yes, because it creates greater suspense.
B) No, because it is unnecessary and redundant.
C) Yes, because it provides a link to describing Mary’s day.
D) No, because the reader is already aware of the day’s mysteriousness.

Answer 1

I'd say the first choice.