She pretended that she was making a flower-bed, and she stuck big scarlet hibiscus blossoms into little heaps of earth, all the time growing more and more angry and muttering to herself the things she would say and the names she would call Saidie when she returned.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE
B) making a flower-bed and
C) making a flower-bed but
D) making a flower-bed

Question

She pretended that she was making a flower-bed, and she stuck big scarlet hibiscus blossoms into little heaps of earth, all the time growing more and more angry and muttering to herself the things she would say and the names she would call Saidie when she returned.

Choose the best revision, if one is needed.

A) NO CHANGE 
B) making a flower-bed and 
C) making a flower-bed but 
D) making a flower-bed

Elsa213 · Answer

I believe it is the second choice.

daddyslittledevil · Answer

B. The comma is not really needed