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bill533:

On November 11, 1933 a very strong dust storm stripped topsoil from desiccated South Dakota farmlands in just one of a series of disastrous dust storms that year. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) On November 11, 1933 a very strong dust storm was stripping C) On November 11, 1933, a very strong dust storm stripped D) On November 11 1933 a very strong dust storm was stripping

MLYS2:

C

bill533:

The dust clouds blew all the way to Chicago where filth fell like snow, dumping the equivalent of four pounds of debris per person on the city. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) to Chicago, yet dumped C) to Chicago, so dumped D) to Chicago, and dumped

MLYS2:

no change

bill533:

That winter red snow fell, on New England. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) That winter red snow, was falling on New England. C) That winter red snow fell on New England. D) That winter red snow falling on New England.

MLYS2:

What do you think?

bill533:

C

MLYS2:

Its C.

MLYS2:

Good job

bill533:

Witnesses reported that they could not see five feet in front of them at certain points. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) they could not see at certain points. C) they were blind at certain points. D) they could not see their hands in front of their faces.

MLYS2:

Hmm

bill533:

A ?

MLYS2:

Yes

MLYS2:

Correct good job

bill533:

Consequently, the U.S. Government formed the Soil Conservation Service which is now the Natural Resources Conservation Service. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) However, the U.S. Government C) In addition, the U.S. Government D) Nevertheless, the U.S. Government

MLYS2:

I believe B

bill533:

Consequently, the U.S. Government formed the Soil Conservation Service which is now the Natural Resources Conservation Service. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) However, the U.S. Government C) In addition, the U.S. Government D) Nevertheless, the U.S. Government it was A

bill533:

The dust clouds blew all the way to Chicago where filth fell like snow, dumping the equivalent of four pounds of debris per person on the city. Choose the best revision, if one is needed. A) NO CHANGE B) to Chicago, yet dumped C) to Chicago, so dumped D) to Chicago, and dumped it was D

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