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She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool, brisk swim. Which is the best revision of this sentence?

dude:

Make sure to include the answer choices next time A.She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim. B.She met her friends at the hotel’s bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming pool for a cool, brisk swim. C.For a cool, brisk, refreshing swim at the hotel’s pool, she met her friends in the hotel’s lobby on the bottom floor. D.The sentence is correct as written.

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