Question

She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool, brisk swim.

Which is the best revision of this sentence?
A.She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.
B.She met her friends at the hotel’s bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming pool for a cool, brisk swim.
C.For a cool, brisk, refreshing swim at the hotel’s pool, she met her friends in the hotel’s lobby on the bottom floor.
D.The sentence is correct as written.

pls help

Answer 1

What do you think the answer is?

Answer 2

idk prob B.
but like im trying to find out if its correct

Answer 3

@Gdeinward am i correct tho?

Answer 4

Its A.

Answer 5

It flows the best and the lobby is always on the bottom floor so it is pointless to mention

Answer 6

thanxs bro

Answer 7

Yw

Answer 8

@russkaya05

Answer 9

I just tagged you back to your own question

Answer 10

lol