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Max1oof:

Heres my song Just Leave Me Broken Already (Puppet Show) You keep pushing pulling the strings on my arms im just your puppet waiting to be thrown away and replaced im warn and chipping ripping at the seams My soul is leaving My pulse is weakening No one can fix this This chaotic mess of me Everyone is leaving The puppet show is ending My soul is screaming for freedom But its stuck in this infinite loop of shows Just leave me broken already If this is for your fun Then why mske yourself the bad guy Oh, your doing it for the attention so more will come for the puppet show I know my strings are fading and im wearing The stuffing is falling Im dirty, filthy, sick, twisted But i still play the puppet show becuase i know that when its over Ill be another one of your broken toys waiting or repair Everyone is leaving The puppet show is ending My soul is screaming for freedom But its stuck in this infinite loop of shows Just leave me broken already The show ended my limbs fell my seams ripped my fiery, dark insides spilled on the floor everyone ran out, screaming as loud as angry flames roaring from the fire pit where you dropped me to burn Everyone is leaving The puppet show is ending My soul is screaming for freedom But its stuck in this infinite loop of shows Just leave me broken already Im just some paint chips in the ashes a glass eye shining in the moonlight gleaming porcelain skin torn and scared burned and buried in the ashes of my mind

clon800t:

Wow that’s cool

supdasup:

Although it is like a puppet show, it has a dark meaning. Pretty awesome.

mylesnewman:

yeah you hired lmao you and DC can work together if you want

Max1oof:

lmao okay myles and thanks to everyone

immacoolperson:

it's awesome

immacoolperson:

I think puppet show is a more appropriate and accurate, and even though u say "Leave Me Broken Already" Puppet Show is shorter and when people say the name of your song, I think puppet show would also be easier to remember. But, since it's not my song, you can do it however you like.

Skatercat:

Claps bravo i loved it

12123333333333333333:

That is AWESOME!! good job! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Max1oof:

thanks everyone and @immacoolperson , ur right lmao

Buenos88:

Love it

psycho:

wow nice job :)

denkik123802:

great job

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