Question

So I was wondering if anyone wanted to look at a song I wrote, for feedback and maybe help with a title. Lemme know if interested in seeing it. Thanks

Answer 1

interesting. sure

Answer 2

Cool, give me a second

Answer 3

Aight here goes:

Thing is,
Personally I think we sigh too much
Think we try too much
Think we cry too much
And really?
Sometimes we want to die too much

Then there’s those days
When we don’t think we’ll make it-
When we don’t want to make it
The chance is always there,
But too scared to take it
So we just fake it
So we just wait it out
Til we’re safe
Til the paint
Can be taken from the fake face
But it’s only temporary
Because without it the world is scary

Then there are the “friends”
They say they’ll help you reach the surface
While they’re pulling you under
But you don’t realize
Until our conscious is stiff as the thunder

Yet it’s the same thunder
That wakes you from those bad dreams
Tells you things aren’t as bad as they seem

And ever notice how the sky
Is always there for the clouds
Even when the Tornado of Them
Is pulling them down?

So now see
That the sky has been here for us always,
But has felt more pain
Than we could ever dream?

Answer 4

@DCharger96 @AngeI @Skatercat

Answer 5

i like it! i find it interesting there isn't really a chorus, is there a reason? i think a good title for this song may be "faking it to make it" since from my interpretation of what the song is i think it's relating to that haha i'm probably not the best at song titles

Answer 6

Thanks. I really like that title idea. I never thought about the chorus. Maybe DC can help me out with that

Answer 7

I'm about to try out some vocals real quick, so brb

Answer 8

@werewolf

Answer 9

its rlly good myles

Answer 10

thankss

Answer 11

np

Answer 12

I like it c:

Answer 13

thank youu

Answer 14

@Alexo

Answer 15

damn bro its really good

Answer 16

not good its amazing

Answer 17

hiya ppl

Answer 18

i like it

Answer 19

thanks everyone

Answer 20

@Alexo @Eddie97 @Rosebud24 @lyli

Answer 21

that hit me right in the fells bro, really good.

Answer 22

dang

Answer 23

thanks

Answer 24

Heres a little song that I wrote, Be happy. Its great! Good job

Answer 25

Thanks again

Answer 26

@jokerlover102 @Jasminexx @Hero @BenLindquist

Answer 27

I like it but if u like sing it like rap but its awesome good job

Answer 28

Thanks

Answer 29

@adovbush @misty34

Answer 30

sexy

Answer 31

and i scoop

Answer 32

It's good, I like it

Answer 33

thanks

Answer 34

You're welcome

Answer 35

@LilChris

Answer 36

ya i like it a lot

Answer 37

thanks i dont know if i should put it in the song or not or just make another beat

Answer 38

@Elsa213

Answer 39

send me the beat @email lulchris17@gmail.com

Answer 40

i love it myles good job

Answer 41

imma tell u if i like the beats
but frfr u did an awesome job on the lyrics

Answer 42

thank you

Answer 43

make sure u email me the beat and i will open a google doc with me u and Dcharger and we can make another song also

Answer 44

alright

Answer 45

title ideas???

Answer 46

@12123333333333333333

Answer 47

"Pain" or like dingas2002 said "Fake it to make it"

Answer 48

alrighty thanketh

Answer 49

It is a great song!!

Answer 50

nah well let u name it

Answer 51

okay and thanks 12

Answer 52

@Alexo

Answer 53

its rlly good myles

Answer 54

thanks thanks

Answer 55

oop

Answer 56

that doesn't help me

Answer 57

@Alexo

Answer 58

THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGGG

Answer 59

REEEAAAALLLLLYYYY?

Answer 60

I really wanna do vocals on it but its your song

Answer 61

yea you can

Answer 62

4 real

Answer 63

yea

Answer 64

THANK YOUUUUU eep

Answer 65

YOUUU WELCOMMEE

Answer 66

very emo.

Answer 67

@SirCrabby

Answer 68

do not ping the crabster

Answer 69

oop

Answer 70

do not bother the crab

Answer 71

yes john daddy

Answer 72

i will leave the crab alone

Answer 73

shut up John daddy.

Answer 74

DO NOT SHUSH THE JOHN DADDY

Answer 75

yes do not.

Answer 76

I will do it anyways