Question

im writing a play thingy for my dramatic writing class, what do yall think so far

Forgotten
By Eddie Hobbs

Lucas:
Um, where do you think your going?

Blaze:
He doesn’t need me anymore, therefore i am leaving.

Anon:
wait , what? You're leaving. Excuse me sir but i don’t think now is the best time for you to leave him.

Lucas:
I'm gonna have to agree with Anon on this one. He needs you here, he needs all of us now more than ever.

Blaze:
Yea well he should have thought of that before he did what he did. He destroyed everything, ruined our lives, and hurt her. I'm leaving.

Anon:
i cant believe im saying this but think about the child, keno, how much he loves you. Think about max, how much she trusted you with keno. Think about everything you did to protect them from any and all threats.

(all pause and look at Anon)

Blaze:
SHUT UP!!! YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT THEM!!!

Anon:
I KNOW MORE THAN YOU THINK I DO? I WATCHED LUCAS GROW UP!! I WAS THERE FOR MAX WHEN LUCAS WAS OUT FOR WEEKS ON END. YEA I ADMIT I HATED IT BUT I WAS STILL THERE FOR THEM.

Answer 1

thats what i have so far, its not done yet

Answer 2

its great!!!

Answer 3

any criticism???

Answer 4

Damn dude dats amazing yo i can't even do tht lol all i can do is write music

Answer 5

thanks yall

Answer 6

yw man its really good

Answer 7

you have any criticism???

Answer 8

i dont it sounds amazing to me

Answer 9

thanks

Answer 10

is there an introduction to it?

Answer 11

that is the intro.

Answer 12

oh its dope

Answer 13

ye

Answer 14

im working on more edits to my work, when i get done ill post it. for yall to see.