Heres a song I wrote: On the street I was walking and I came across some guys and they were talkin One was Hispanic, one was black, the other was white they were talking about the many wrongs and few rights One knocked racism, one knocked criticism, one knocked capitalism The more each person preached, the closer they reached to a schism They each pointed fingers, and dealt out blame they all began to fight and began to call names Each one person thought they were right and everyone was wrong Soon the fight began to escalate, they might have even killed each other before long It was then I decided to make a move I did the best thing I could choose I jumped in and broke up the fight and I said,"Heres whos wrong and whose right YOU all ARE. No matter your sexuality, gender, or race Your all guilty, and you know it, I can see it in your face. After I said this, they all stood in astonishment the shame in their faces was prominent Then all at once, they began to hug and make peace it was amazing, to say the least After all, they were friends! You see these problems are common for everyone all of these problems could be done, all it takes is the voice of just one
I like it!
thank you
its dope dawg
great job
It really good
good job mate
thanks guys
I love this! what part is the chorus and verses?
eh I ddint give that much structure
noice
This is good I like the concept =^-^=
I like it, but the line One was Hispanic, one was black, the other was white doesn't really fit in
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