Question

Heres a song I wrote:
On the street I was walking
and I came across some guys and they were talkin
One was Hispanic, one was black, the other was white
they were talking about the many wrongs and few rights
One knocked racism, one knocked criticism, one knocked capitalism
The more each person preached, the closer they reached to a schism
They each pointed fingers, and dealt out blame
they all began to fight and began to call names
Each one person thought they were right and everyone was wrong
Soon the fight began to escalate, they might have even killed each other before long
It was then I decided to make a move
I did the best thing I could choose
I jumped in and broke up the fight
and I said,"Heres whos wrong and whose right
YOU all ARE.
No matter your sexuality, gender, or race
Your all guilty, and you know it, I can see it in your face.
After I said this, they all stood in astonishment
the shame in their faces was prominent
Then all at once, they began to hug and make peace
it was amazing, to say the least
After all, they were friends!
You see these problems are common for everyone
all of these problems could be done,
all it takes is the voice of just one

Answer 1

I like it!

Answer 2

thank you

Answer 3

its dope dawg

Answer 4

great job

Answer 5

It really good

Answer 6

good job mate

Answer 7

thanks guys

Answer 8

I love this! what part is the chorus and verses?

Answer 9

eh I ddint give that much structure

Answer 10

noice

Answer 11

This is good I like the concept =^-^=

Answer 12

I like it, but the line One was Hispanic, one was black, the other was white doesn't really fit in