Question

The second song I wrote, I realized it sounds kinda emo but, I guess it's fine. It's called Turn back Time (Omg, it doesn't rhyme)

Here I am sitting, thinking and feeling alone.
I'm always wondering why I feel like nothing is good enough.
I'm tired of the changes and only want things to be normal again.
I'm wishing I can turn back time and fix this again.
Everything feels so screwed up
If i can turn back time I'd fix my life.
There is so much I regret and just want to erase
I want all the good memories and erase all the bad
I've been trying and I still don't feel like it's enough
Wish I can just turn back time.
I hate how I feel, just wanna feel normal again
I feel so unstable
I'm always feeling upset and like nothing is ever good enough
I want to take back control of my emotions but I've tried all I could and I'm stuck
I'm just wishing I can turn back time and change it all.
I'm always feeling like I'm holding you back, maybe you're better off without me.
I'm sick of accusing for no reason because my emotions are controlling and corrupting the way I think.
I'm wishing I can turn back time.
I want to trust but I find it hard, my feelings are a repeat of the past memories I want to erase.
I want to feel happy again
I'm stuck here wishing I can turn back time
There is only one happiness in my life and it's my love for you
You're the only thing I will keep in life
Everything else I wanna erase
I wanna trust you more, everyday I try, every second I love you, I never wanna lose you.
I don't want my emotions hurting you the way I hurt myself
Sometimes I wish I can turn back time
Deep down inside I know everything is good enough but, my emotions take control
Everyday I wanna banish my emotions and only be positive
Everyday I'm feeling like I want to turn back time.
I want to fix how I feel
I want to be with you for the rest of my life
I only wanna keep you and erase everything else
I realize all I need is to stop wanting to turn back time
Nobody is perfect, everything gets better forget about the past and look towards my future with you
My only happiness in life is you, when things get crazy I'll never give up, I'll stay by your side
your love is enough to make me stop wanting to turn back time
I realize I can fix myself in the future, just gotta hang on a little longer, your love makes me feel strong

Answer 1

.o. this sounds supreme

Answer 2

Thank you!

Answer 3

np anytime!

Answer 4

i like it misty it is really good

Answer 5

Thank you

Answer 6

your welcome

Answer 7

NOICE

Answer 8

its really good!

Answer 9

I wish I could turn back time, to da good do dayyyyyys

Answer 10

lol

Answer 11

:applause:

Answer 12

very nice! my friend named i love my family posted a video of her singing and she is 13 go check her out i feel like u would get along

Answer 13

yaaaaaaa i am so proud of her

Answer 14

awwwww thanks cyber

Answer 15

it rhymes in some part and it pretty good, shows your feelings even if it doesn't rhyme