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Eddie97:

Forgotten By Eddie Hobbs Lucas: Um, where do you think your going? Blaze: He doesn’t need me anymore, therefore i am leaving. Anon: wait , what? You're leaving. Excuse me sir but i don’t think now is the best time for you to leave him. Lucas: I'm gonna have to agree with Anon on this one. He needs you here, he needs all of us now more than ever. Blaze: Yea well he should have thought of that before he did what he did. He destroyed everything, ruined our lives, and hurt her. I'm leaving. Anon: i cant believe im saying this but think about the child, keno, how much he loves you. Think about max, how much she trusted you with keno. Think about everything you did to protect them from any and all threats. (all pause and look at Anon) Blaze: SHUT UP!!! YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT THEM!!! Anon: I KNOW MORE THAN YOU THINK I DO? I WATCHED LUCAS GROW UP!! I WAS THERE FOR MAX AND KENO WHEN LUCAS WAS OUT FOR WEEKS ON END. YEA I ADMIT I HATED IT BUT I WAS STILL THERE FOR THEM. Blaze: YEA JUST LIKE YOU WERE THERE WHEN YOU HELD LUCAS DOWN AND LET YOUR FRIENDS BEAT THE LIVING Sauce OUT OF HIM AND LEFT HIM TO DIE. JUST LIKE YOU WERE THERE TO TAKE HIS GIRLFRIEND FROM HIM. JUST LIKE YOU WERE THERE TO DUMP HIS SON ON THE SIDE OF THE ROAD MILES FROM HOME AND LEAVE HIM THERE. YEA YOU WERE THERE FOR THEM BUT NOT IN THE RIGHT WAY. Anon: *in shock* How do you- Blaze: I was there. I saw everything, you thought nobody was there to see but every time i was there to see everything. How do you think lucas is still alive after you and your friends beat him. How do you think he found out about you and his girlfriend. How do you think his son got back home in time. You're talking about them to the wrong person anon.

Eddie97:

i added alot more work on my scrip what do yall think positive and negative feedback is accepted.

Babyplier:

this is great

Eddie97:

thanks.

Lilypup01:

fun

landonsanford:

cool

SummerWars:

NOICE

Lunar:

this is amazing

KatMon01:

I love it ^-^

Eddie97:

thanks, you guys are awesome. im thinking of entering it into the Georgia literary competition but idk if its good enough for that.

KatMon01:

You should ^-^ It's very good.

Eddie97:

thanks

KatMon01:

You're welcome ^-^

lyli:

I love it baby it's great 😁

Eddie97:

thanks.

xXGachaStuffXx:

this is REALLY GOOD i cant beat this i suck at writing so yah obviously

Eddie97:

lol

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