Question

Here I did this for DC:
(the same song from his post, but I wanted to post it in my own XD)
here man, I did this for ya, I hope you like it:
Everybody's sitting here calling your name
I know you're expecting me to take part in this damn game
But I've got nothing to lose or gain
Just tryna keep my reputation the same
A sidedrinker in a bar drowning her name
Everybody’s drinking something more or less the same

Kinda been meaning to give you a call
Really it ain’t nothing at all
And now I just wanna curl into a ball
Ive seen the writing on the wall
Im like a king just waiting to fall

Girl, I miss you
You made me so tame
It’s my fault I’m sitting here,
Screamin your name
Now I realize its never gonna be the same.

What am I gonna do without your love
Your just like an angel from up above
Im standin on the edge of the cliff
Im gonna give myself a shove
Im like a slave on an endless shift
Im like a guitarist without a rift
Im like a drifter waiting on a lift
Girl I miss your love

Your gone forever, gone with the wind
Im wishin I never sinned
She was just so pretty, so sexy
Her influence on me was just so hefty
But now I see you were the one for me
My one true love, my other turtle dove
My sea to shining sea
My greatest epiphany
But now theres no one to blame but me.

Answer 1

*DC:POSTS SONG*
*GD:REPOSTS SONG*
ITS FREE REAL ESTATE

Answer 2

I expanded on his song for him

Answer 3

he was stuck, so I helped. Im just waiting fer him to see it..

Answer 4

its really good

Answer 5

you really think so? Its seems midiocre

Answer 6

@HowellK20

Answer 7

Oh waow this is nice

Answer 8

I don't know what to say other than Thank You, Gavin, its amazing

Answer 9

Its no prob man. Im glad you like it!

Answer 10

Do you feel like theres anything I should add?

Answer 11

no its perfect GD

Answer 12

we should collaborate on songs more often dude

Answer 13

can I run something by you?

Answer 14

sure bruh

Answer 15

sup

Answer 16

I've been meaning to call
You don't have to worry, its nothing at all
Just remembering the good old days with you baby
Cuz right now I'm just, missing you like crazy

The bartender just keeps refilling my drink
Ain't giving me time to think
Keep saying just a few more drinks
Y'all know what that means
I'm getting up to leave
And what do i see
You're walking in with your friends and suddenly
All eyes are on me

Cuz I've been meaning to call you lately
You don't have to worry, its nothing really
Just screaming for somebody to save me
But right now I'm just missing you like crazy

Everbody's screaming your name
Boys yelling "Bottoms Up!" but the crowd don't feel the same

Answer 17

Damn DC, thats good man. I dont think Ied change a thing

Answer 18

Thanks Gavin