Question

Every time that you walk by
You always catch my eye
Every time you say hi
I just lose my mind

I see you and my face goes red
Everybody knows what goes unsaid
But I just can't get you outta my head
Girl, I'm losing it

When the guys see you with me
They won't let me be
I could close the door and we could see
What happens with you and me

I could take you for a ride
Maybe go for a drive
All we got is time
We don't have to try to get by
All I want is to be alone with you tonight

Every time that you walk by
Every time you catch my eye
Girl, you make me smile
Making it worth my while

I know I could kiss you right now
How bout we take a drive downtown
Or we could stay home and screw around
Or I could lay one on you right now
Baby let the sun go down
And I could kiss you right now

Answer 1

tell me what ya'll think suggestions for new lines are welcome!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

I LOVE it bro!!!!

Answer 3

its pretty good

Answer 4

any suggestions for lines?

Answer 5

its great i don't really see the need to put some new lines

Answer 6

Thank you Jasmine

Answer 7

agreed

Answer 8

ig

Answer 9

i hear alot of background noises

Answer 10

lol

Answer 11

@Djpup

Answer 12

nah man not at all

Answer 13

This is great the way it is

Answer 14

Thank you bro

Answer 15

this the new recording

Answer 16

@mariexx

Answer 17

this is nice

Answer 18

thx

Answer 19

^^ yw

Answer 20

omg it is so good, good job!

Answer 21

Thank you

Answer 22

no problem i want one for tho lol

Answer 23

im working on one

Answer 24

lol u better lol friend love to u DC

Answer 25

lol i wil and i am friend, love you too Marie

Answer 26

lol always

Answer 27

I love listening to them both they are amazing!!💙