Question

those storm clouds gather in her eyes,her fathers gone his life flashed before his eyes.Her mother was a nice women tried to help the best she could,still the wether man called for a twister she said"blow it down" theres not enough storms in oklahoma to forget the sins that were made in that house theres not enough love in californa to stop the lies in that town.(this is all I got so far)

Answer 1

is that a song???

Answer 2

yeah,one im makeing

Answer 3

ah. so far it sounds pretty good although i would try and stick with just one place. it makes it seem jumpy and confusing for the listeners

Answer 4

okay,well,I tecneicly did. theres not enough love in californa to stop the lies in that town.
I live in cali and my dad died in a town in oklahoma.

Answer 5

also your turn in the rp

Answer 6

>.> @Eddie97 WHERES THE KAT

Answer 7

im sorry for your loss; what i meant by stick with one place was while writing this song you could write about your experiences in the place you have more
of an emotional attachment to such as Oklahoma where your father passed away.

Answer 8

I see.