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(Please don't hate me you guys XD this cringe is from a few years ago and I decided to post. Hope it's not too bad)
Broken Glass for Roses
I hate that I know of what’s been done. I can’t believe this I’m repeating no. I’m afraid to let go of what I’ve been shown… Once I remember trying to forget more than twice I have left the scene, never to return only to be back to see again what it is you did to me. I don’t want to know who it is you think I am honestly you are really wrong for I have been alive but dead for far too long it cannot be of any good or use to me. Drowned my sorrows, hid my fear, bit down my nightmares, and quieted my tears all these things I live with they’re inside my head, they’re very near, all for you I did it dear all for you… and down I fell as you left the Broken Glass​ for Roses​.

Answer 1

Cool!

Answer 2

I don't think it's terrible

Answer 3

Awe ;-;

Answer 4

You actually did great with this one but you said it's too cringe like you said

Answer 5

Like I said I was like 14 when I wrote this one lol

Answer 6

but it's good tho

Answer 7

i hope there's more you can write one day

Answer 8

This goes with it

Answer 9

this is really good kat