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CrescentWang1994:

"Are You Proud" 'Sorry, I can't make it.' 'Oh. That's fine.' 'It's just...' 'Yeah. It's whatever.' Another time let down You're not around You said you'd try But I guess it was a lie All I ever wanted Was to hear you're proud of me Is it too hard to ask, Or even see? Are you proud of me yet? Do you like who I've become? Are you proud of me yet? Do you see what I have done? Everything I've done, I've done to make you proud But here I am now in an empty house Something that means a lot, you push aside Who am I to you, and your pride? All I ever wanted, Was for you to see me, Is it too much to ask, Or even see? Are you proud of me yet? Do you like who I've become? Are you proud of me yet? Do you see what I have done? Are you proud of me yet? Did you make a bet? That I wouldn't grow up to be, The daughter you thought you'd see And here I am now, Looking for you in the crowd, But I know the truth now, That you'll never show. Are you proud of me yet?

Hxani:

Yes very proud

CrescentWang1994:

@Hxani thanks heh, it was written because of my dad missing a lot of important moments and breaking a lot of promises he made, it's a song actually

Hxani:

OMG I FEEL U

Lilypup01:

im proud and I SO WANT TO USE THIS IN A GACHA LIFE STORY OML

Hxani:

IM HERE FOR CHU

Lilypup01:

can i???? no i cant cus idk how to sing this song lol

Lilypup01:

aye

Lunar:

this is very good. I enjoyed reading this but I feel there is a deeper resone you posted this,am I correct?

CrescentWang1994:

@Lilypup01 you're allowed to and you can make your own way for how it goes, i don't have a way on how I want it sung actually nor music to it yet. same goes for the rest of my songs actually which i'll be posting soon ^-^

CrescentWang1994:

@Lunar yea there's multiple reasons as to why it was written and posted but the inspiration was my dad

CrescentWang1994:

@Hxani thank you

Lunar:

I see

CrescentWang1994:

@Lunar i write my emotions instead of speaking them

Lunar:

same

CrescentWang1994:

@KatMon01 this ish another one Kat lmao

KatMon01:

This hit my feels. Also touches personal feelings about my life before moving here ;^;

CrescentWang1994:

@KatMon01 oop i've more to post if y'all want

KatMon01:

I do love it though very good Cres <3

KatMon01:

Do it if you want to ^-^ I'm gonna start posting mine too.

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