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Lunar:

"Shattered" Yesterday I died, tomorrow's bleeding Fall into your sunlight The future's open wide, beyond believing To know why, hope dies Losing what was found, a world so hollow Suspended in a compromise The silence of this sound, is soon to follow Somehow, sundown And finding answers Is forgetting all of the questions we called home Passing the graves of the unknown As reason clouds my eyes, with splendor fading Illusions of the sunlight And a reflection of a lie, will keep me waiting With love gone, for so long And this day's ending Is the proof of time killing, all the faith I know Knowing that faith, is all I hold And I've lost who I am, and I can't understand Why my heart is so broken, rejecting your love Without, love gone wrong, lifeless words carry on But I know, all I know, is that the end's beginning Who I am from the start, take me home to my heart Let me go and I will run, I will not be silent All this time spent in vain, wasted years, wasted gain All is lost, hope remains, and this war's not over There's a light, there's the sun, taking all shattered ones To the place we belong, and his love will conquer all And I've lost who I am, and I can't understand Why my heart is so broken, rejecting your love Without, love gone wrong, lifeless words carry on But I know, all I know, is that the end's beginning Who I am from the start, take me home to my heart Let me go and I will run, I will not be silent All this time spent in vain, wasted years, wasted gain All is lost, hope remains, and this war's not over There's a light, there's the sun, taking all shattered ones To the place we belong, and his love will conquer all Yesterday I died, tomorrow's bleeding Fall into your sunlight

Ballery1:

why is this so depressing???

justjm:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ballery1 why is this so depressing??? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) GenZ individuals tend to have some weird but extreme obsession with anything related to depression. BTW, I'm not trying to undermine this piece. I'm just saying.

Razor:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justjm \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Ballery1 why is this so depressing??? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) GenZ individuals tend to have some weird but extreme obsession with anything related to depression. BTW, I'm not trying to undermine this piece. I'm just saying. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Kind of a weird reply to such a simple question

justjm:

Well it's not wrong.

DCharger96:

i approve of this song.

Lunar:

thanx Dc

DCharger96:

Your welcome, This song is amazing and shows a great portrayal of emotions. Great Job!!

Lunar:

:)

Lunar:

thanx,I was sad when I posted this

DCharger96:

Your welcome. I feel it is important to share our emotions with others the best we can and if you need anything I'm here for you

Lunar:

okay.thankyou so much,your very kind

DCharger96:

your welcome Lunar. Thats what friends are for and thanks

Lunar:

np

Lunar:

:)

GachaAnimeluvy:

DIS IS GREAT AND WHAT MADE YOU SAD OML IMA KILL IT

xXDerpyPugXx:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @GachaAnimeluvy DIS IS GREAT AND WHAT MADE YOU SAD OML IMA KILL IT \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Life.

GachaAnimeluvy:

lol

GachaAnimeluvy:

noice but no i wont kill life

Lunar:

lol

Lunar:

durpy made meh sad

GachaAnimeluvy:

yah he is pretty mean sometimes

Lunar:

agreed

GachaAnimeluvy:

^^

Lunar:

:)

GachaAnimeluvy:

*dab*

Lunar:

*dabs*

GachaAnimeluvy:

yeet derpy gonna be so mad

Lunar:

haha good

Lunar:

hi yall

GachaAnimeluvy:

hoi

Holly:

Hai Lunar!

Lunar:

hi sis!

GachaAnimeluvy:

evryone is saying hi lol except eddie

Lunar:

.-. oof

Holly:

LOL

Lunar:

but wolf really like that .-.

Lunar:

I thought he was diffrent :(

Razor:

Mind closing this? If you're going to have a conversation, there's a chat for a reason

Lunar:

mind not being rude for once?

Lunar:

I'll close this when im done makeing my new song

Lunar:

I have wrighters block -_-

Razor:

writer's block you mean LOL

Razor:

Whatcha need help with, cuz I can help

Arrow12:

This is really Good. almost cry lol.

Lunar:

im makeing a song 4 my dad,who passed november 19,2019 but im stuck

Arrow12:

I am so sorry about that.

Lunar:

thankyou

Arrow12:

yeah anytime.:)

Lunar:

ok razor,I closed this post for you,though I posted something new lol

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