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Lunar’s past(my oc) Part two Preview

I took a deep breath and stepped forward”number 98001 step forward” Valentine stepped forward with the same cruel and twisted smile on her face as drake once had,than out of the corner of my eye I saw him,Drake was still live!? Shock rolled over me as I realized why Aaron hadn’t come back..”n..no” I closed my eyes and sighed”Aaron was weak just like you! I’ll make this quick so you can join that loser”Valentine said,at this one of the doctors ring a bell for the fight to begin.I opened my eyes anger swelling up inside of me.”This end here”I said as my eyes changed from ice blue to red”for you maybe but not me!”Valentine said as she rushed at me I just stood there patiently and at the last moment grabbed her wrist,forcing her to drop her weapons and pinned her to the ground,then smacked the back of her neck making her pass out and stood up tryumpily,the doctters announced that I was the winner and was to be freed at once.
An hour later
I was just putting the last of what little belongings I had in a backpack when the Door opened and I was escorted out of my room and into a car. I sat quietly as I watched the lab I spent so many years in fade away in the distance until it was nothing but a small spot in the distance. I turned my attention to the road ahead that we were driving on and soon I could see a large city. “Alright,our kid” said the driver and I was left there on the side of the street pinching myself to make sure I wasn’t dreaming.”Ouch!” I couldn't believe it, I wasn’t dreaming I was really out of that awful place..no more injections..no more fighting! I was thrilled to be out,to be free.

To Be Continued...

Answer 1

should I keep going with part two?

Answer 2

wow you good at writing.

Answer 3

thank you :)

Answer 4

Yeah No problem. :)

Answer 5

writing is something that helps me calm down when im upset

Answer 6

I gtg now

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bye

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bye. :)

Answer 9

You should keep going, I'm interested. In fact, I want to start writing my own backstory, I just don't want to seem copycattish

Answer 10

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Answer 11

thanks guys C:

Answer 12

This is really great writing you should most definitely keep going.

Answer 13

ok,I will