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CrazyHotGhost:

Indigo's BackStory Part 2 By Sakaya Majoni As I turned around to head back to what seemed to be a bed of my own, I was faced with the lady that embraced me in the store, and a boy of my age (She’s 16 in this part of the BackStory). She smiled sweetly at me, and looked down at Natalie with a questioning look in her eye. I looked over and blushed, embarrassed at my lack of manners. In my few years with my parents, they taught me to be nice to people until you get to know them better. So I put my sweetest smile on, and introduced myself. “Hello, ma’am. My name is Indigo. Indigo… Comandi, and this is my sister, Natalie. I’m 16, she’s 9. I’ve taken care of her since our parents left us, when I was only 8, and not old enough to care for an infant, but we survive.” I shook Nat’s shoulder softly. Her eyes fluttered open slowly, and she looked up at me with fear and question in her eyes. I smiled and said, “This is the nice lady that saved us. This is Ms… Umm… Ms…” The lady spoke up for the first time since I met her. “Ideka Longstork. But you can call me De-De.” We both nodded, and I looked down for the first time and saw just about the prettiest nightgown ever known to man. I just stared at the gown, speechless. “I-Is this… M-M-Mine?” Ms. Avi nodded, flashing a smile even prettier than the gown. She seemed to notice the boy at her side for the first time since we started talking. “Oh! This is Thomas. And welcome to the Future Tech Laboratory! Home of the most advanced technology mankind will ever know!!!

CrazyHotGhost:

Read part 1 to try to understand 2.

Eddie97:

imma be honest with you on this. all i got involving a back story on your character from this is that she is 16, has a sister thats 9 and that theyve been alone for quite some time with out their parents.

CrazyHotGhost:

@Eddie97 Yes. Their parents left them alone in the streets one day and never returned.

Eddie97:

is there more to the backstory or is the abandonment all there is?

CrazyHotGhost:

There's more, but it comes as a dream in Part 3, which I'm typing up now.

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