Question

Can I get some feedback on what I have for my song so far, please?

Answer 1

We’re always bringing others down
Push, get up, shove back
It's all we ever seem to do now
Like people’s feelings mean jack
Insulting every kid we know in town
We all know we are way better than that

Jumping people on sidewalks
Only reason is because we can’t talk
Police marking it up in white chalk
Saying this is where the body dropped
But it's not my fault the car didn’t stop
It’s not my fault that your heart broke when it dropped
I only thought that everything we knew would stop

We’re always bringing others down
Push, get up, shove back
It's all we ever seem to do now
Like people’s feelings mean jack
Insulting every kid we know in town
We all know we are way better than that

Answer 2

So far seems like it's on the right track. :)

Answer 3

I like it so far. A lot of rhyming which is good in some cases and this is one of those cases. Keep it up.

Answer 4

Yup

Answer 5

Thanks, y'all for your feed back and i'll keep it up. :)

Answer 6

Your welcome.

Answer 7

it's amazing dc

Answer 8

Thanks Lunar

Answer 9

no prob thats what friends r for right?

Answer 10

Damn right you are

Answer 11

yeet

Answer 12

XD

Answer 13

XD lol

Answer 14

hru Dc?

Answer 15

Good job baby

Answer 16

Thanks and i'm good

Answer 17

Thats is such a mood bro i like it.

Answer 18

Thanks man

Answer 19

No problem bro