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Here's some more of that same story:

Hi. My name’s Allison Harley. From a young age, my mother taught me about the elements. No, not the ones on the periodic table, the ones that were thought to be the basis of all matter; Earth, Fire, Water, and Air. She also told me stories about how there were some people in the world with the ability to control these elements and how there were bad guys that wanted to control them all, so there were four people chosen to protect the balance of nature. But they were only stories, right? None of them could possibly be real. Well, they are. Now. let’s move on to the story. How about we start at the very beginning, (when I knew nothing about how real all of my mother’s stories were,) I woke up to the sound of my crazy little brother named Harold Harley, (yeah I know, lame name, right?), jumping on my bed.

It was 6:30 in the morning and my little brother was jumping on my bed to wake me up for school. Sometimes this was a good thing, sometimes it wasn’t. Like today, I was having the best dream ever, but I couldn’t remember anything but the colorful lights I saw when he woke me up. “Stop that! I’m awake!” I smacked his legs.
“Get out of bed, and I will.” he replied.
“Fine.” I angrily, put my foot out. He tripped and fell off of my bed. That’s what you get, scrub. I smirked as he fell and got out of bed, heading towards the bathroom to get ready for the day.
I enter the kitchen with a smile,
“Good morning Mom, Dad.” I said, giving them each a kiss in turn. “G’morning Allie.” Dad said, giving me a kiss on the cheek.
How do you guys like the first page of the first chapter?

Answer 1

A lot of you seemed to think that this is a good book, so I decided to give you a bit more.