Question

if I was a red head would my dad love me

if I was perfect would he love me

if I wasn’t foolish would he care

if I was brain wiped would it change how I think

I don’t know but in the dead of night

im screaming out tearing my skin apart

just for the pain watching the blood drip down

in the morning she puts her make up on

along with her fake smile

pretending that she’s okay

yet every night she’s crying

she wishing to die wanting it to happe

yet it never came but what did come messed her up more

it was the sweetest kindest person she knows

yet he doesn’t see what he does

she still hides from him she still lies to him

she never asked for pity yet it came

all she asked was to die alone

feeling her blood slowly coming out of her body

feeling the peace and blindness coming

she whisper one last thing

no matter what I did no one will love me

alone at last my blood is gone

I’m free

Answer 1

wow

Answer 2

@aaa what

Answer 3

nice

Answer 4

@Collin thanks I kinda wanna show it to my teacher for this contest but it’s not any good

Answer 5

you should!! awsome!

Answer 6

Really?....I’ve done other ones I just don’t know

Answer 7

its really good! i like it at least and im being serious

Answer 8

relatable

Answer 9

your poem was wonderful

Answer 10

Thanks

Answer 11

I understand,tht basically happened to me when I was little

Answer 12

Wanna see some of my other ones ?
Everything I write is true

Answer 13

Yeah I would love to dm them to me

Answer 14

👍

Answer 15

That was more than awesome!,more than Wonderful!!!!!