Question

Can yall help me use the correct punction and grammar

This article shows 2 scenarios with children with art projects. One child is given directions and the other child is not. The first scenario is a 3-year-old child who sits at the table focus on his art. He gathered some white paper and a bottle of glue some scissors small bits of colored paper tissue paper and some finger paints from his special art box. He picks what colored paper to cut in which to tear he glues each small item to the white paper creating a collage and then he finger paints Bright red all around his gluing and created a framed effect with delight he shows his sister his creation and begins to make another piece of art.
Scenario 2 there Is a four-year-old who waits for instructions while her mother gets materials for a flower basket. Her mom places a piece of large white paper glue bottle and a pair of scissors and some small pieces of tissue paper on the table and says OK you can make this however you want but the basket is the base and I will cut that for you and then the tissue paper pieces are the Flowers let me show you how to tear the tissue paper the child places the basket in place and glues the Flowers creating the basket of Flowers as planned she shows her mother what she has just made and says Did I do this right

These are some examples that show two very different types of art. In the first scenario, the process art experience that was experienced can make the child have many opportunities to explore the materials thing can express himself and create whatever he wants and the second is a product-focused art experience where the child follows the directions given to her mother to make a predetermined product.

these are two types of art experiences that do not support the child's development in the same ways it is important to know the difference to offer the children's are experiences that support their creativity and enjoyment of art and their thinking skills and healthy development in the long run.

Answer 1

for one, it is punctuation

I'm short on time, but I'll help you get through part of the first paragraph since it's the longest

"This article shows 2 scenarios with children with art projects. One child is given directions(add comma here) and the other child is not. The first scenario is a 3-year-old child(add comma here) who sits at the table focusing on his art. He gathered some white paper(add comma here) and a bottle of glue(add comma here) some scissors(add comma here) small bits of colored paper(add comma here) tissue paper(add comma here) and some finger paints from his special art box. He picks what colored paper to cut in (I'm pretty sure this was supposed to be "and") which to tear(add semicolon here) he glues each small item to the white paper(add comma here) creating a collage(add comma here) and then he finger paints Bright bright red all around his gluing(add period here) and This created a framed effect(add semicolon here) with delight he shows his sister his creation(add comma here) and begins to make another piece of art."

Answer 2

Thank you

Answer 3

Punctuation