Question

These are just random thoughts and rhyming ideas. let me know what you think and which ones are your favorite! ^-^

Would you catch me if I fell?
Cause I'm under your spell.
No more secrets to tell.
I've risen from hell.

I'm livin on the edge,
Jumping off the ledge.
Takin the life long pledge.

Played and used.
Scarred and bruised.
Lost and confused.

Pain rips through the heart.
Torn apart...
from the start.

Shadows move in the night,
passing through dim light,
bark is no worse than their bite.

Things to hope in, above.
Trust turned into love.
Future more pure than a dove.

Pain: the only visible sound.
Mountains: They're fallin down.
Princess... with the torn gown
I'm the queen of this town.
I wear it's worn crown.

Answer 1

is this on padlet? these are really amazing!!

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

youre welcome!

Answer 4

I like the last one, I enjoy writing little random things like this :P

Answer 5

I should post mine sometime but eh.
How often do you write these?

Answer 6

lol

Answer 7

love them keep going

Answer 8

I agree, keep going I love them too

Answer 9

thanksssssssssss

Answer 10

Lol

Answer 11

Great rhythm

Answer 12

I like it u have potential

Answer 13

Thanks! :) just btw this is the same person... lol just different account. XD

Answer 14

@LandonGoma

Answer 15

it's very beautiful you should show these poems to someone that could change your life girl i mean i would if i was you. Not everyone gets a big chance and this one of one them. Keep up your good work!!!! Maybe one day someone will realize how good you are.

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LandonGoma
it's very beautiful you should show these poems to someone that could change your life girl i mean i would if i was you. Not everyone gets a big chance and this one of one them. Keep up your good work!!!! Maybe one day someone will realize how good you are.
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Thanks :) You too!