Question

Hey tell me what you guys think

Song:Don't wanna say good-bye

By:Me

In dedication to my dad

When I close my eyes,all I see is your faces as the memories of us replay back to those happyer times,when the world seemd to stop..We walked down a long winding road but you stoped in the middle,You smiled and told me to keep going as I watched you fade away,tears streaming down my cheeks,You've gone and spread your wings I know your not coming back but I wasn't ready for you to leave me,no I wasn't ready to say goodbye and do this on my own. I dont wanna let you go,I don't want this to be our last goodbye. I never got to tell you how much you ment to me,don't you relize how much I need you? Can't you see the fear and pain in my eyes.I want you here,I want to hear all you have to say-Oh let me here your voice just one more time daddy,I miss you so! I wasn't ready for you to leave me,Im not ready to do this on my own! Now time is passing ever so slowly as I live without you,Like I even have a choice! can you see me from up above? do you know how much Your loved? I'll never forget you,you'll remain in my heart forever and ever. Oh I love and miss you daddy, love your baby girl.

this is all I got for it so far what do you guys think?

Answer 1

@xXDerpyPugXx

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@XxCRAZYGIRLXx

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@XxGachaisCoolxX

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@Lazyman21

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@LoneWolf

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@LOnely44

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@Lionblaze15

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@Luigi0210

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@Holly

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@heartbreak18

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@Hxani

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@Hero

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:O

Answer 14

I feel that bro

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@Arrow12

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@Collin

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do you guys think it's good so far?

Answer 18

Yes i love it.

Answer 19

*snif snif*


Bringing tears to my eyes.

Answer 20

OMG I really do love this. and I am crying right now cause this is heartbroken to hear this. and I am so sorry this happen to you.

Answer 21

I made this for my dad,he died in 2019 I really miss him

Answer 22

Awww at least you had your memories with him, right?

Answer 23

Yeah

Answer 24

thats my dad

Answer 25

aww.

Answer 26

I have been told im the girl version of him

Answer 27

yup here comes the tears.

Answer 28

next time dont tag my other account instead tag this one got it? my dad yelled at me for having a notification message in my email -_-

Answer 29

and i think its good ^^

Answer 30

AWW this reminds me of my brother Vicent who dies

Answer 31

;-;

Answer 32

what

Answer 33

actually now that i think of it more deeply this rememinds me of my dead friend Q^O

Answer 34

@GachaAnimeluvy same one of my friends died

Answer 35

it looks good

Answer 36

Awe that's sad, I got tears in my eyes it reminds me of losing my uncle AJ to a heart attack :( But this is good.

Answer 37

Okay it's Lionblaze15 and yes soooo sad

Answer 38

Is there anything I can add to it?

Answer 39

Powerful.

Answer 40

Powerful?

Answer 41

wow girl! those are some powerful words you wrote! I'm so sorry your dad died. If I may ask, how?

Answer 42

Yes, powerful. The song.

Answer 43

He was shot

and thankyou guys for your support

Answer 44

.>. -was first tagged- i luv dis im sowwy .>.

Answer 45

lol

Answer 46

lol karma

Answer 47

how was he shot? i mean like why was he?

Answer 48

Very good...Also lost my dad

Answer 49

really? im so sorry

Answer 50

Yeah...skydiving accident...happened when Ivwas 9....I wasn't there that day

Answer 51

IM SOOOOOO SORRYYYY

Answer 52

It is okay...it is life

Answer 53

Idk they are still investigating,The FBI is involved in the investigation for his murder

Answer 54

When did it happen?

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November 19 2019

Answer 56

It's going to be 3 months since his death soon I miss him

Answer 57

Oh okay, I'm so sorry to hear that

Answer 58

:(

Answer 59

Death of a family member is never easy

Answer 60

True

Answer 61

Yeah

Answer 62

Theses words are powerful and yeah it is sad because I lost my dad when I was a baby. :(

Answer 63

Im so sorry for your loss

Answer 64

yeah it's ok. I still think about him everyday.

Answer 65

It's really good. Maybe you could publish it.

Answer 66

There is always a light at the end of the tunnel

Answer 67

This is great and very touching

Answer 68

Wow that reminded me of my mom if i cried anymore i would have

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i like it

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✌✔

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aww, well written good job

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good job

Answer 73

Woahh! I like it how did ur dad died???