Question

Poem
It’s a free verse so it can be about anything but it has to have 12 lines with out meter or a rhyme scheme
Has to have four sound devices
Use for four of figurative language
It can be like 3 alliteration and a onomatopoeia

Answer 1

This is for writing poems? Or are you making one?

Answer 2

Both

Answer 3

I'm asking the creator of the post.

Answer 4

Or is this asking for help to create one with these guidelines?

Answer 5

@Eiwoh2 I have to come up with one but I’m nit good at this

Answer 6

Ah, okay.
So 12 lines, has to rhyme, 4 sound devices, and 4 figurative langauge.

Answer 7

All right so let's start by asking if you know what these terms mean. Sound devices and figurative language?

Answer 8

Yes I know what they mean

Answer 9

All right. Perfect. So you would like to incorporate alliteration in your poem. So you just need a topic?

Answer 10

Well here’s my problem I can’t do poems I’m alwful at making them

So far the only thing I have is
Rain pours down outside the window
Days roll by like it’s nothing
But it’s still the same thing
Dark cold and alone

Answer 11

Okay, that's a wonderful theme. Just days alone while rain pours outside.
Maybe in the second half of the poem you can imagine you were outside in a happy enviroment.

Answer 12

So how about we incorporate the rhyme factor in the first 4 lines.
Maybe we can edit the first two into

Rain pours down outside the window Days roll by, while i'm stuck in sorrow

Answer 13

thats good

Answer 14

Thank you, Rye.
What do you think, Clon?

Answer 15

That’s good I like it

Answer 16

Wait a minute. The question states "without a meter or a rhyme scheme."

Answer 17

Ouch.

Answer 18

My bad, I misunderstood that. So I guess your version of the first four lines is good, we just need to add some of the figurative speech there.

Answer 19

Well if I keep the first four lines I still have 8 more to do

Answer 20

Yes sir. So i'll give you an idea.


Rain pours down outside the window Days roll by like it’s nothing But it’s still the same thing Dark and cold like a bat in a cave

Answer 21

So I tweaked the last line so it can contain a simile, thus taking care of one of the figurative language uses.

Answer 22

So the next four lines could be about your imagination and how it spreads to being outside in sunshine and rainbows, for example. And you can include a personifcation use, such as "the flowers danced around me" or something like that.

Answer 23

Okay thanks

Answer 24

No problem! Check back with me if you have any more questions or want me to revise what you have so far. :)

Answer 25

Sooo this is what I have so far


Rain pours down outside my window
Dats roll by,while I’m stuck in sorrow
Dark and cold like a bat in a cave
Frozen in time stuck in thought
But outside her mind
Flowers dance around kids
The splash of water from the kids swimming
Birds singing yet she’s stuck in her head

Answer 26

Ik it’s only 8

Answer 27

great job! except its 'days' not 'dats' lol

Answer 28

Werid I have that on my paper I must of typed it wrong

Answer 29

haha its fine i just wanted to make sure you knew it was a typo

Answer 30

Thanks

Answer 31

youre welcome

Answer 32

That sounds awesome. I'm sure you'll come up with a fantastic result!