Question

(IDK what to call this song that I started writing a while back)

I know I'm gonna die someday
But I don't want it to be today
Just in case
I've got a few things to say
I loved you anyway

Tired of picking myself up
Girls saying I was never enough
Or I was too afraid to open up
Saying I'm worth their love

Girl, my hearts beating in my chest so fast
Damn the way you pull me so close like that
Not caring where we're at
Got me guessing how you could lay on me & leave like that
A broken heart just thrown in the trash

Tired of picking myself up
All the girls saying I was never enough
Wasted love
Too scared to open up

But I'm like "yea that's me"
I don't know what it is these girls can't see
That they just jump right into love blindly
Maybe its because I'm country
Hell no I ain't from the city
Making love in the back seat
I don't know what it is these girls can't see
But yea that's me

Answer 1

if y'all have any ideas for more lines pls do post them and I'll see what I can do

Answer 2

Please do comment feedback is welcome too

Answer 3

it's really good. good job.

Answer 4

Thank you Shelby

Answer 5

Yeah this is really Good. I almost got nervous when you write this lol. Good Job. :)

Answer 6

Lol thanks for the feedback

Answer 7

Yeah No Problem.

Answer 8

I will try to think of a title of your song.

Answer 9

Thanks I really appreciate that

Answer 10

YW :)

Answer 11

it's good, heart touching, good job

Answer 12

Thanks man i appreciate the feedback

Answer 13

ye

Answer 14

50/10 stars

Answer 15

Damn Derpy thanks